Hi, I review this doc and have some comments as below: 1. In section 1, I think the order of benefits of server virtualization should be intuitively corresponded to the order of benefits of virtualization described earlier. So, I'd like switch the second bullet and the third for benefits of server virtualization for the third bullet for benifits of virtualization, I don't know how the term 'Encapsulation' related to described easier deployment and provision benefits. In your ppt presented in IETF77, you use 'abstraction' instead. 2. In section 3, I don't know all the requirements are applied to isolation VNs or aggregation VNs or both? It might hard to distinguish these 2 types. E.g., we deployed 3 VNs on top of the existing infrastructure in my department, when we consolidate computing resources from another department with my department, the 3 VNs could be expanded as well. The isolation and aggregation VNs co-exist. 3. In section 4, you gave us an example where different service providers use different VNs, what if users want to use services provided by different providers, should they join different VNs (explicitly or implicitly)? Thanks, washam
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